Oh, that's lovely, Frank, the best one of yours I've seen yet. Shiverous; nice turn on "becomes," especially. ("Hello, Darkness, My Old Friend?" Wednesday morning, 3 a.m., right?)
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Oh, that's lovely, Frank, the best one of yours I've seen yet. Shiverous; nice turn on "becomes," especially. ("Hello, Darkness, My Old Friend?" Wednesday morning, 3 a.m., right?)
ReplyDeleteThe only thing wrong with it is that it will not be eligible for the First Annual Books, Inq. Haiku Competition, coming soon to a browser near you.