Saturday, August 02, 2014

Haiku …


The lissome cyclist 
Notices the old man's glance
And isn't bothered

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:31 AM

    I have been following your lead by composing a few "haiku" of my own over at Beyond Eastrod. Perhaps I will also try my hand at so-called English language haiku -- different syllable requirements: 3 / 5 / 3 -- but for now I like the challenge and the possibilities of the traditional Japanese 5 / 7 / 5 arrangement. As I understand Japanese haiku, there is an attempt to express the intersection of nature at large and the individual. Am I wrong?

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  2. I mostly read Basho and take my lead from him. I make no pretense of authentically mirroring either Japanese traditions or — in Basho's case — Buddhism. I just like the brevity and the sense of an experiential snapshot.

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  3. What I am interested in is the lissome-ness of the cyclist that got the old man's attention ;)

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  4. Trust me, Vikram, she was quite lovely.

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